Improvements and Post Production Diary

1st Print Advert Feedback  



Here is the feedback which I have received for the first print advert. I have a clear understanding of what I have done well and what I need to improve in order to make this print advert more appealing. In order to make this advert better I will need to add the logo of Sunderland Culture to show who the client is and I also need to move around the slogan so it is in the middle of the print advert. 

2nd Print Advert Feedback


Here is the feedback which I have received for the second print advert. Similar to the first one the overall feedback is pretty positive. Again with the feedback I have been told to add the Sunderland Culture logo to the print advert. I will start to make these improvements so then I will end up with a final product.   

1st Print Advert Improvements 


Here are the improvements I have made to the print advert. I have taken notice of the feedback and added what I was told to add. I added the Sunderland Culture logo and made the slogan bigger so it's easier to see. The size of the slogan is a very important part of the Print Advert as the audience will need to read it clearly from a reasonable distance as the message itself is supposed to inspire and encourage them to discover the culture of Sunderland.

2nd Print Advert Improvements 


The only improvement which I made to this design was the Sunderland Culture logo. I needed to add these to both print adverts as it shows who the client is. This was the only part of the 2nd Print Advert that I was asked to improve. I feel like this version of the Print advert looks a lot more professional due to the company logo which I have added. I added this to show the audience that this work is designed by the company Sunderland Culture and the work was set by them.  


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